Shrink accident by christiawi Work in Progress. You're an 18 year old genius who still lives at home with your family before you move away to college. Being the smart person you are, you're constantly tinkering Lesbian lovers sex creating new gadgets to better the lives of your family.
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Prev Main Gallery Download Next. After a long, long, long wait, another is here. Another interactive story is here!
It took me awhile to get this one done, mostly because I've been having a creative block lately. Here ya go! I know it's AdFly, but that's how I keep these games free.
As always, please leave comments on what you think. I love reading them and seeing how I can improve.
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I've been meaning to post some constructive criticism here. For starters, regardless of whether you click "drink it" or not, the narrative proceeds assuming you have.
I also didn't like the way you assumed the reader was, shall we say, male looking for male From a Kik roleplay link story perspective, it was well written, flowed, and i couldn't find any seriosu grammatical errors. However, I thought the rabbit's response was too quick and unexplained, and didn't seem to vary when the choices changed All in all, a pretty good attempt.
You're close, but not quite there.
Keep trying! Thank you for the feedback.